45 via figlaipersa
west verona, it 10001
july 10, 2008
to lord capulet,
romeos love for juliet causes him not to fight against her cuzin tybalt who wants him dead.It has come to my knowledge that tybalt had a hate for romeo.romeos love for juliet causes him not to fight against her cuzin tybalt who wants him dead.When confronted romeo did not want to fight because he loves juliet.When tybalt trys to attack romeo mercutio being romeos best friend he jumps in and fights tybalt. Mercucio lost valently to tybaly with his life, trying to protect romeo, in romeos anger of his friends death he takes the sword and kills tybalt and then runs away.
The capulet parents should teach there Christian children the right way the christian way. To discipline them and to take control of women and not men that they need to take control of and teach there child the right discipline.
sincerely,
SEAN CURL
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palazzo capulet [you need capital letters]
45 via figlaipersa
west verona, it 10001
july 10, 2008
to lord capulet,
romeos['s] love for juliet causes him not to fight against her cuzin[sp?] tybalt who wants him dead.[space]It has come to my knowledge that tybalt had a hate for romeo.romeos['s] love for juliet causes him not to fight against her cuzin[sp?] tybalt who wants him dead.[space]When confronted romeo did not want to fight because he loves juliet.When tybalt trys[sp?] to attack romeo[,] mercutio being romeos best friend he jumps in and fights tybalt. Mercucio lost valently[valiantly?] to tybaly[sp?] with his life, trying to protect romeo, in romeos anger of his friends death he takes the sword and kills tybalt and then runs away.
The capulet parents should teach there[their] Christian children the right way the christian[caps] way. To discipline them and to take control of women and not men that they need to take control of and teach there child the right discipline.
sincerely,
SEAN CURL
[address]
Sean, there are several elements missing from your final letter. Please add them and make the spelling corrections.
Right now your grade is a 2/5, if you make the corrections and complete the assignment you can get 4/5 to a 5/5.
Thanks
T
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